Sunday 14 June 2015

1star-organized 
2star-pictures 
3star-colour 

Wish-for future references I wish that I made it a bit neater but do to aid my sports I had limited time.
The purpose of this project was good for us (The Class) the make a graphic organizer. I believe that I should get and low B or an high C  with this project because its not the worst but its also not the best in the class. I think I did well considering all of the "troubles" I had.

Wednesday 10 June 2015

Definition poem

  
                                A person who leaves everything

What’s most to him,
  
To enter a door of HELL and come back.

With more danger around every corner

Going around in circles over and over,

Again and again for a long period of time.

Endured hardness, faced danger,

Always on high alert day and night, all-day everyday.

Paranoia lurks for the men who get past it,

Are different,

No longer the same men they used to be.

Once their home, their not the same.    

Tuesday 9 June 2015

DEFINITION POEM

im only in your imagination
yet i feel so real
i bring out your emotions happiness anger and fear
anything, can happen when im here
you can be who you wanna be
you can travel land and sea
but ill soon have to leave
but please don't you worry
for i will be here again
sooner or later

what am i?__________
 
1star-neat and organized example-the way we chose to organised it
2star-colouful and detailed-pictures and title

1wish-i am quite happy with our project but for future references i think we could have added a bit more pictures on some of the sections because it looks a little dull.

Definition Poem

_____

It is part of the cycle of life,
It is feared by mortals.
It is laughed at by immortals.
It lurks through places to places.
It is not alive.
It is sometimes caused by people.
It does not fear.
It does not slow down.
No doctor in the world can prevent this from happening. 
You cannot stop it.
It will find you sooner
Or later...
What is "it"?

Monday 8 June 2015

Definition Poem


   
  We all must have one,
  We can’t live without them
  But don’t get too comfortable with
  Because anytime, they can walk away
  Don’t make them leave you behind,
  After all the time you wasted
  Take care of them, they are the most important
  We are surrounded by them,

  And they are our ________

Renaissance & Religion projects reflections


Purpose/ Intention:

The purpose of this graphic organizer is just to state the main ideas and have a lot of pictures that are explained in the presentation.

2 Stars:

- I like how it is in point form and not in sentences, it is easy to see, because there isn't a lot of words in it. Also the title is big and easy to read.


- I like how it is divided into 3 sections (when, how & why) instead of just placing the pictures and information randomly.


1 Wish:

- I wish that the religion symbols were bigger than the other ones because they are more important than the other ones, so they have to stand out. 






Purpose/ Intention:

The purpose of this graphic organizer is to organize a lot of information in web form with visual aids and make connections.


Evaluation:


I would give a low "A" or a high "B" for this. I tried to include everything we needed to get an "A". I like the color coding and how organized it is, but i wish I added more pictures and a legend.  I used other types of graphic organizers like a venn-diagram and a chart to get a higher mark. 


What did you learn from these two assignments?


I learned that I have to make a draft for everything before I do a good copy so I don't erase so much and ruin the project. If i make a draft, I would know where to put everything neatly instead of going into the good copy right away. I would also know what kind of materials I need. Second thing I learned is how to organize information using different kinds of graphic organizers.


What are you most proud of?

I'm really proud that I made the Renaissance Project without doing any research on the internet. I only used the video notes, novel notes and the Pathways book questions. Overall, I'm proud of how much effort I put into these projects and how much time I spent making them.


My Graphic Organizers

The purpose for the religion graphic organizer was just for a visual with only pictures and a couple titles to enhance our speech about our religion topic. The purpose for the Renaissance graphic organizer was to show our learning through making connections, using picture and displaying the information we took notes and read about on. With the religion one it probably wouldn't make sense if someone just looked at it because its mostly just pictures it needs a speech to go with it. With the Renaissance graphic organizer its the type of poster that someone would just look at, if there was a speech said about it while the person was trying to look and make sense of the poster it would just be really confusing.







Star- I like how there's a check list at the bottom of the poster of all the things that make up a religion and made it easier to tell if Buddhism is a way of life or a religion.

Star- I like how each section has distinct sections. That makes it easier to see what pictures are in what section.

Wish- I wish the sub titles were more visually appealing



Star- I like how all the colour coding was consistent and helped me look at the poster without feeling too overwhelmed with information.

Star- I incorporated a few charts and a Venn diagram.

Wish-I wish I added a few more pictures.

Sunday 7 June 2015

Definition Poem

A _______________
Has lots of arms
sturdy
Has height
lets in petite amounts of sunlight
Strong as the seas
Sharp little needles
Can be a home
Aged, but not tired
Still growing strong
The oldest one lived 2000 years long



(I'm not sure if I did this right)